You may not like this, but given the many different ways this can be taken in terms of ones life and situations, I think its brilliantly written.
Your usage of the rain, and the type of piece it seems to be speak volumes here and quite frankly if I wasnt a person who had ever stood in the rain (unfortunately i love storms lol) this piece would give a clear view of just what to expect and feel about it....
Very well done honey, I'm off to read more of your work 
