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Mother Nature (working title)
Frost patterns
Lace-like projections
Of the adornment
On Mother Nature's gown.
Drawing the eye
To what she's already garnished
With the frigid reminder
That she is always there.
Category: EJ | Added by: EJKridom (01 March 10) | Author: EJ Kridom
Views: 318 | Comments: 4 | Rating: 5.0/1
Total comments: 4
3 Emoetry  
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I am such a big fan of snow. Especially first snowfalls of the winter seasons. Its almost childlike in its fascination but this writing is a very adult version of what I picture on the first snow fall every winter (yeah im canadian, gotta love the snow).

I like this, and I believe the title should stay until such time something comes along to change it but for now it fits smile

So far you've touched on Rain and Snow...any thought to other season events? You seem to have a way with them smile


4 EJKridom  
0
Not really... where I live there aren't that many seasons. Unless you count the fact that the storms are broken up by heat waves or the snow broken up by ice...

2 EJKridom  
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Thank you very much. I've been having trouble trying to break writer's block and it actually took me almost two hours to get those few lines out.

1 LadyPassionate  
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I can appreciate this piece ... very nice!

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