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"Out of sight..."
You made me a promise,
And I trusted you to keep it.
You swore an oath,
And I believed you.
I've kept up my end of the deal,
But have you?
The reasoning is sound for your reluctance,
But waiting is painful and getting tedious.
Contracts and deals
Only work if both sides respect them.
Obviously "out of sight, out of mind"
Is truer than I thought.
Category: EJ | Added by: EJKridom (11 July 10) | Author: EJ Kridom
Views: 642 | Comments: 10 | Rating: 5.0/2
Total comments: 10
10 EJKridom  
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Thanks

9 wolffproduction  
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I have to say very nicely done here

8 EJKridom  
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Lol believe me,if it comes to swatting I'll do that part myself. wink More fun that way.

7 LadyPassionate  
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Whether it's right about it or talking about it, it usually helps to get it off your chest. Let me know if I can help, even if it is to just swat someone for you wink

6 EJKridom  
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Hopefully but I'm beginning to wonder.

5 LadyPassionate  
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If you read alot of my pieces, you'll hear the same things. Longing, time ticking, waiting. Its excruciating at times and just plain sucks other times. But, if its worth writing about, then hopefully its also worth the wait. I've got your back young lady, just say the word.

4 EJKridom  
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Sometimes, but sometimes it just feeds the fire.

3 LadyPassionate  
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I completely understand and empathize. Writing is an extraordinary way to get the burn to stop hurting for a little bit.

2 EJKridom  
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I'm kind of hoping I already did get their attention but I'm kind of doubting it. It's possible a lot more of my stuff will be posted. I'm too frustrated for something not to.

1 LadyPassionate  
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Sounds like I might need to flick someone in the back of the head for you. It's ok if you were tired and worried. That's when some of the best writing seeps from us. It's a beautifully written piece and shows how much the waiting game hurts. Bravo.

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