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Through His Eyes
I'm never quite sure what he sees in me, though he's told me time and time again. I can't see myself through his eyes. I can't see the strength he describes in my stance. I can't see the passion he says lurks in my eyes. And I surely can't see the beauty he says lies behind my smiles.

All I see is weakness, the tears I have shed. All I see is curiousity, who I've come to dread. And all I see in my smiles is the one tooth that's not quite straight.

So while I stand here staring at the icy reflection of myself, I wonder... how can he see past the faults, to find any virtues at all?

Category: EJ | Added by: EJKridom (08 March 10) | Author: EJ Kridom
Views: 277 | Comments: 3 | Rating: 5.0/1
Total comments: 3
2 Emoetry  
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I apparently need to sit down and have a conversation with you young lady, lol it seems at the very least in this writing that we have many of the same views.

This one here, trying to see what someone else views when they look at us...very deep is all I can say. Who hasn't beeh there before? You know the saying "beauty is in the eye of the beholder" well my answer to that one, and it seems yours too is "is the beholder blind?"

That being said, you writing a piece of this nature, something that doesnt seem angry *ducks from flying objects* is a nice change and whomever the man is here, he obviously saw the right thing in you. It shows very powerfully in your writing style.

I blathered enough, very well done and Im off to read more biggrin


3 EJKridom  
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Lol. It's just that when I'm angry I put it into writing. Much healthier than my old habit of trying to put my fist through walls. Hence... most of my stuff sounds angry.

1 wolffproduction  
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I have to say very nice on this

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